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Breakfast Delivery Service

Hi,

I am launching my first minimal landing page for breakfast delivery service in Zürich city. Any comments and suggestions are appreciated.

http://breadbasket.ch/
https://www.facebook.com/breadbasketch
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Old 28.10.2015, 10:34
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Re: Breakfast Delivery Service

At the very least, it might be nice to see a menu and prices?
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Old 28.10.2015, 10:59
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At the very least, it might be nice to see a menu and prices?
You mean like this?
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Old 28.10.2015, 11:37
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Re: Breakfast Delivery Service

LOL! The keyword 'breakfast' speaks for itself. You don't need a menu. It's called gipfeli here in Switzerland
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LOL! The keyword 'breakfast' speaks for itself. You don't need a menu. It's called gippfeli in Switzerland
And here was me thinking it was a Marlboro and a Red Bull

Seriously though, OP, your web site is crap. At least have some suggestions of what you can deliver if a menu and prices are too difficult.
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Old 28.10.2015, 11:51
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Re: Breakfast Delivery Service

Any why only orders by telephone?

Why not SMS, via a smartphone App, or a website too?
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Any why only orders by telephone?

Why not SMS, via a smartphone App, or a website too?
Or even email - but there's no email address and only in very small almost invisible grey letters can you actually "see" where you deliver to. Come on, if you're starting a business you need to try much harder than this!
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Re: Breakfast Delivery Service

I just put this simple page to see if there any interest for such service in Zürich. However, I agree with you points, the website really lacks lot of information. It Will be updated with menu and price-list in few days.

A smartphone app will be definitely worked out at later stages, when it really works out.
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Re: Breakfast Delivery Service

Doesn't look bad at all, just lacks basic info. Breakfast and brunch delivery sounds like a great idea and something not only private parties would want, but also corporations. If possible, try to have the German corrected, as language mistakes give a bad impression, and add more languages, e.g. French, Italian and English. Good luck with the business
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At least have some suggestions of what you can deliver if a menu and prices are too difficult.
Did you not click on the link? It clearly states:
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SIE KÖNNEN JEDE MÖGLICHE FRÜHSTÜCK WÄHLEN
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I'll take some gluten-free waffles with strawberries and whipped cream please. They need to be fresh and hot off the griddle though. A side of eggs benedict would be nice also. How much would that cost?
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Re: Breakfast Delivery Service

And put some proper photos of what you supply up rather than generic model photos like on your FB page.
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Re: Breakfast Delivery Service

Hi, Thanks for you suggestions. I will definitely take it up. Thanks again.
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