Hello!
My name is Alexandra, I am 25. I live in Zurich.
I am writing doctoral thesis in law and economs at University of Zurich.
I am searching for a job in law offices, in marketing, management, PR, HR etc. I have 4 years experience in marketing, speak fluently ( ) English, communicative German and French. If you could help my in some way I would be very grateful.

Dear Alexandra,

You will not get very far with your claim you speak the English anguage fluently if you make as many mistakes as you do in your writing (and even in the title; the word you want is not spelled 'desperatly'). Can you figure out what is wrong with your message? I've indicated at least some of the problems in bold.

J.

Hallo!
My name is Alexandra, I am 25. I live in Zurich.
I writing doctoral thesis in law and economy at Uni Zurich.
I am searching work in law offices, in marketing, management, PR, HR etc. I have 4 years experienc in marketing, speak fluent english, comunicative german and french. If You could help my in sokme way I would be very grateful.

J. thank You for the mail.
the true is some of mistakes I made just because of stupidity
I've just corrected my post.

If You have some comments, please don't hestitate to write


take care Alex

I am surprised you were able to edit your introductory message with a post count of only 2, Ms. Alexandra. Either the moderators exceptionally activated the edit function for you to correct your mistakes, or I have not quite understood the process of newbie accession to higher privileges on this forum.

at least I understood what she was looking for.

I think it will help her more, if someone points out the options/references for obtaining a job; rather then correcting her english.

Alexandra, may be you shall open a new thread for drafting your posts and getting your posts verified

neerahi

Mind you ... English is not mother language so I won't feel so stupid asking why should I capitalize "you" ?

Thanks

Btw: Congrats on my 100th post :-)

Oh my God,

nOw We hAvE tO bE cArEfuLL wItH leTTErs AsWell ..

Hi,
Do you have any IT related experience ?

We are looking one sales person to market our software products.

PM me for more details.

Thanks

Here's the link to the university classified ads - (job ads): http://www.marktplatz.uzh.ch/index.cgi

Here some examples:

Student required to work 40%
Support of the Investment Performance and Reporting team (monthly portfolio returns, preparation of presentations & quarterly analysis of investment account).
You have completed a bachelors degree (4 semesters) in Economics or in a numerical/quantitative discipline. Excellent excel skills & profound English knowledge
Inserate-ID: 176408 2008-08-14

Student part-time job in finance
We're looking for 1-2 students who are expected to be fast learners and have BWL/finance/economics basics to help us with the admin of a PE fund.Main tasks will be keeping books,records and communicating with the offshore fund administrator.Your work committment would be 1-2 days a week.Pls contact for details.





good luck!