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Old 18.12.2011, 12:47
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text in German: help

Hello,

we are having a party for my 5 y.o. son, and I would like to inform my neighbors.
Here is the text I have written: is it correct?


Am Mittwoch, den 28 Dezember, zwischen 15,00 und 19,00 Uhr, werden wir ein paar Kinder und Eltern einladen.
Entschuldigung es etwas laut wird.


(paar means "some", right? I'd like to be sure it means not "a couple"... because children will be at least 10!!!)

THANK YOU!
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Old 18.12.2011, 12:54
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Re: text in German: help

I'd write:

Entschuldigen Sie, wenn es etwas lauter wird.

ein paar is ok as it means "some" as you correctly said. But you could also say "einige" . Is it a birthday party? Then you might as well mention that.


Am Mittwoch (...) wird mein Sohn seinen Geburtstag feiern.
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Hello,

we are having a party for my 5 y.o. son, and I would like to inform my neighbors.
Here is the text I have written: is it correct?

Am Mittwoch, den 28 Dezember, zwischen 15,00 und 19,00 Uhr, werden wir ein paar Kinder und Eltern einladen.
Entschuldigung es etwas laut wird.

(paar means "some", right? I'd like to be sure it means not "a couple"... because children will be at least 10!!!)

THANK YOU!
Am Mittwoch, 28. Dezember, 15.00-19.00 werden wir einige Kinder und deren Eltern einladen. Bitte entschuldigen Sie, wenn es eventuell etwas laut wird

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