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Old 29.08.2007, 12:30
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Text help for VOUCHER

ok, i need a help on the following issue:

i do have to set up some voucher for a product change program.

that means: today one customer is buying an analog product.
if he decides to buy an digital product within next 24, 36,48 month,
he gets paid back 40, 30 or 20% from the product price. its rewarded by price reduction on the new one.

so i need a headline saying something like:

buy today, profit tomorrow

or something like that. normally i give this to our agency, but they are to busy to help me right now...

any ideas?
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Old 29.08.2007, 12:45
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Re: Text help for VOUCHER

Buy now and make your purchase futureproof !
Purchasers who choose to upgrade within xx will receive a major discount on the latest digital equipment !

Its a start

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ok, i need a help on the following issue:

i do have to set up some voucher for a product change program.

that means: today one customer is buying an analog product.
if he decides to buy an digital product within next 24, 36,48 month,
he gets paid back 40, 30 or 20% from the product price. its rewarded by price reduction on the new one.

so i need a headline saying something like:

buy today, profit tomorrow

or something like that. normally i give this to our agency, but they are to busy to help me right now...

any ideas?
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Old 29.08.2007, 12:58
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Re: Text help for VOUCHER

thanks, daveA.

"invest in dave pints- get the real elvis/johnny in reward"

"tutti frutti...dadadada..."
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Old 29.08.2007, 13:03
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Re: Text help for VOUCHER

In the copy , I would talk about : "peace of mind" and "investment" and "future-proofing" and possibly reduced "cost-of-ownership" or "life-cycle-cost" if its B2B.

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thanks, daveA.

"invest in dave pints- get the real elvis/johnny in reward"

"tutti frutti...dadadada..."
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